Nowadays, it is argued by few individuals that history is paramount subject in schools, whereas other believe that science and technological subjects are more important. Both the views along with my opinion will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with the benefits, research is the prime reason that why science is important. To elaborate, due to this it is very easy to find any research about anything. To examplify, nowadays, corona penedemic is perilous ailment which put inhabitants life in jeopardy. This is main fact that it becomes easy to make vaccine for the safety of individuals health. Moreover, technology is becoming an essential part of life which is helpful for society, environment and animals. In the present time, everyone know that different experiments can be done with the help of technical gadgets, while in the past time, dearth of awareness people did heinous crime by doing experiments on various animals such as dinosaurs which has been gone. Consequently, science and technology is still important for many purpose in daily life. Despite having above-mentioned subjects, history is also play a paramount role in students life. Knowledge about the ancient buildings is the first and foremost reason, history helps the students to know about myraid things like culture, tradition, festival and sports but especially about ancient buildings. For instance, The Taj Mahal, Chinese wall and Pyramid of Colombia the history of these all old buildings is mentioned in history book. In addition to it, through history they can learn about government, societies, scientists, systems and technologies were built, how they operated and how they have changed. All this knowledge makes community more educated. As a result, this subject also play a good role in people life. In my opinion, science and technology is important then history subject because when inhabitants learn about the usage of these technological devices then they can do their work very easily by saving alot of time such as fridge where they can store their food for long time and in case of emergency they can do phone call to doctor for taking help and their neighbourhood. In conclusion, although history is play a paramount role to know about ancient buildings, the advantages of science and technology cannot be avoided by society which makes community life easy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46467391304 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10046488488 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557065217391 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 241.226288884 49.4020404114 488% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 287.285714286 106.682146367 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5714285714 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.4285714286 7.06120827912 346% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226202005036 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118784581638 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732191484484 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226202005036 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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