A highly controversial issue today relates to whether history is included in one of the most pivotal curriculum in educational institutions or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then give my own perspective on the matter.
On the one side of the argument, there are people who argue that history is a vital subject we need to learn at school. The main reason for this believing is that it is necessary for students to boost up their knowledge about their countries' history. It is also possible to say this will encourage them to have a deep respect for the earlier generations' sacrifices. One good illustration of this is our resistance war against the invaders in the past, which helped our country gained the independence until now.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact, studying subjects like science and technology can greatly enhance students' career development. People have this opinion because they think these subjects provide us practical knowledge, which is the greatest tool help us move forward. A second point is science and technology subjects spark the creativity and the spirit of students which enable them to catch up with the development in the digital world. One particular example of this is that with many advanced technologies as artificial intelligence and virtual reality being used in diverse fields including in education, commerce, military and so on.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, i feel both history and science have a significant role in people' lives. This is because all of them can help us gain critical knowledge in many different fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99656357388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76354474047 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0909665002 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252710158301 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079410975825 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683610703069 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138048347665 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033540713639 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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