Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In present days, whether History or Science and Technology should be prioritized in education system is of many controversial issues that we have to face. The aim of this essay is to analyze these two sides of the argument and express my own perspective which is inclined to the latter view.
With regard to History, it is believed to take an indispensable role in modern life of every individual. Needless to say, History provides us in-depth knowledge of events as well as historical figures which enhance our pride of national identity. Thanks to this, every citizen is aware of what their forefathers had to sacrifice and shows their gratitude for them. For example, Vietnamese are often said to have a good sense of patriotism because they are well-educated of History since this subject is mandatory at school. As a consequence, a myriad of campaigns and programs are carried out in this nation to raise people awareness of maintaining and developing historical heritages.
However, it is understandable that some subjects related to Science and Technology such as maths or physics are particularly focused in former education in certain territories. With the rapid development of technology in the 4.0 industrial revolution, people strive to gain more scientific and technological understanding in order to mitigate the risk of being replaced by a robotic workforce in the future. Therefore, students should be equipped properly with up-to-date knowledge in this field at an early age. One recent research conducted in Japan has shown that children who are taught scientific and technological skills in primary schools perform better in their career path than those who do not gain these skills until they go to high school.
To reiterate, although History still plays a vital role in the contemporary society, subjects related to Science and Technology are believed to be more important in former education. Thus, each country should develop flexible plans to adapt to different situations so as to continually thrive in this digital age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... plans to adapt to different situations so as to continually thrive in this digital age....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25531914894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99599853857 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607902735562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7037209529 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190494000634 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574425898138 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443451387145 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10553849347 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245157005079 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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