Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, it is generally believed that History plays an extremely significant role in curriculum. However, other people argue that there are also subjects which are more crucial nowadays, such as Science and Technology. From my personal perspective, I hold an agreement with the latter statement.
For a variety of reasons, as the modern world is developing with a profound pace, there has been a prolific increase in the quantity of occupations, which require employees to be knowledgeable about technology. As a result, it is necessary for students to build up their fundamental knowledge about Science and Technology, as they might be easy for them to be employed after graduating. Moreover, students who are equipped with a certain source of information about Science and Technology are able to catch up with the latest trend as well as using cutting-edge gadgets released annually on the global scale.
Apart from the aforementioned practical concerns, some people hold a firm conviction that History is also one of the most vital subjects in educational system. This is because History provides a detailed look about the past to the students so that they are capable of recalling their own ancestors. Another reason is that History shows what achievement as well as failures that were done in the past. Subsequently, knowing about such information will assist people and prevent mistake repetition,
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that such subjects related to scientific and technological fields carry more significant roles compared to historical subjects
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48207171315 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0894147376 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5051197903 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.6 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15210962899 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586435870081 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575871638972 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090744509879 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397550776605 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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