Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this epoch, it is considered by many masses that secondary sectors must be growth for solving the poverty. However, other believe that it is not beneficial for poverty and it should be stopped. According to me, industrial growth is necessary because it helps to take employment. I will explain both views with my opinion in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some predominant points which favour of secondary sectors. Firstly, factories give job to people. To explicate, If the factories will be built more then it would provide more jobs. Unemployment is decreased by them as well as it makes new products with good quality and suitable price which incline economical condition. For example, one survey was done by Canadian government that was 60% people survived their life from industry during those jobs which had been done by them.As a result, industries are play a vital role in human life and the growth of it should be necessary.
On the other hand, there is prominent factors which agree with taught should be in schools.Chiefly, homeshool would be negative effect on students manners such as, discipline,how can treat with others and how they can give respect to elders. without these manners anyone will not success in future. In addition, some parents are not well educated they do not able to give proper education to their children. Apart from this, parents never make educational environment ( like schools ) in home. Finally, if students attend classes at their home then they cannot participate during the compition ( which are inaugurated by traniers at education center ) and learner cannot judge theirselves.
In conclusion, although industrial growth has benefit but there is more disadvantage from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20284697509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74529269991 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3608361337 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246786927798 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721141295208 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577786524823 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152912412311 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679348134573 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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