Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
It cannot be denied that the Internet plays an important role for people in keeping contact with each other, even when they are hundreds of miles from each other. From my point of view, I agree that the Internet is a worthy communication advancement of human being but it also brings negative affections to anyone abuses it.
Admittedly, the Internet is a smart bridge to erase distance among people. While our ancestors had to travel a long way to have a talk with their relatives living in the other hemisphere, we today could text messages, use voice chat or make video call to our friends and relatives everywhere we are thanks to the Internet. Moreover, it reduces ricks of mail loss and information tardiness by sending and receiving information just in few seconds. In workplaces, it helps international corporations economize on managers and leaders’ travel fees as well as time by creating online meetings. Therefore, the Internet stands people in good stead of business and daily life as well.
However, the Internet has its advantages and disadvantages like both sides of a coin. Due to Internet addiction, many people, especially young adults fritter all their free time away on surfing the Internet. As a result, they have to suffer from many Internet-related diseases such as short-sighted eyes, obesity, physical laziness. They are addicted to online chatting that they pay less attention to people who are sitting face to face with them. So that, the Internet can also create disconnection Internet abusers.
In conclusion, using the Internet as a means of communication brings consumers easiness and convenience. The Internet would be harmful to people who are not able to control themselves.
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Sentences with neutral…
Sentences with neutral sentiment are what I don't really understand. what should I do with them?
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92403612237 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646428571429 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6327956717 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274566144926 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900179760613 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512234044518 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172789175182 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318796042278 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.