Some people say it is a good idea for all employees to wear a uniform at work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is better for the young to get advice from older people than young people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Ans-- It is widely contended by a growing number of individuals that looking for assist from elderly people is best method compare to juvenile. In my opinion, I completely agree with the aforesaid statement because aged masses have experience of life as well as know-how to balance work-life.
There is a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that vast experience of life phases. In other words, taking guidance from mature person's is more significant rather than peer due to senior people have the treasure of knowledge, and wisdom about life so they can skilfully give a piece of advice to offspring. For instance, in the eyes of older people when children seek for right counselling, the always guide better due to proper knowledge of wisdom. Hence, the above example speaks volumes that senior individuals guidance more benefits for progenies.
Another pivotal aspect of this assertion is that getting direction from elders young people rise knowledge about how to balance work life. This means that mature masses are well- aware of differences between their work as well as professional life. To epitomise, elders people not only give appropriate advice but also help in their careers goal due to self- proficiency. As a result, children can take advantage of serious counselling.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly agree that if young masses follow aged people advice, they will get more merit rather than their peer or same age of friends. Because older individuals have more real-life experience as well as more aware of balance personal and job life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
... looking for assist from elderly people is best method compare to juvenile. In my opini...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hen children seek for right counselling, the always guide better due to proper kn...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...bove example speaks volumes that senior individuals guidance more benefits for progenies. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08540925267 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66369571883 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2493523273 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128709922797 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577448033736 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841447666365 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112820217203 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109490870607 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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