some people say that it is impossible for a country to be both economically successfull and have a clean environment. to what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that a nation cannot keep a balance between developing economies and having a clean environment. I strongly agree with this opinion that economic success will lead to damage to the environment. This essay will support my answer with additional details.
For economic growth, an enormous amount of energy and resources are needed, from wood to non-renewable resources such as coal, oil, natural gas. The more developing the economy is, the more the environment is exploited. For example, people have been destroying tropical forests for wood, agricultural development which is one of the main causes changing the global climate. Or overfishing directs the shortage of fish species. All of these threaten biodiversity which makes a balanced environment.
In addition, people tend to live in the economic developing regions, particularly in cities. Infrastructure of these areas need to be constructed to meet the requirements of the overpopulation, increasing pressure on the regions’ environment like loss of the natural habitat. Also citizens have to face dozens of environmental problems such as noise pollution, road congestion, lower air quality and huge increase in household waste and industrial exhaust.
In conclusion, it is difficult for economic growth and a clean environment to coexist. When a country attempts to develop its economy, the environment will be affected more or less because of exploiting resources and citizens’ production and daily activities. If each nation only focuses on the economy, the environmental conditions will become worse, and soon we will run out of inhabitable places on the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cannot keep a balance between developing economies and having a clean environment...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nment like loss of the natural habitat. Also citizens have to face dozens of environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55731225296 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16305814138 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640316205534 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3127454251 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195841785261 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633788814796 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582888857795 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111179875192 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135888413304 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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