Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion
To know whether a country is developed or not, just assess its economy and almost every country sacrifices the health of its environment for economic expansion. While some people believe that the desire to grow economy without adverse impacts on the environment is unpractical, I think that a strong economy and a clean environment can co-exist.
On the one hand, the economic growth will inevitably lead to environmental degradation. Firstly, a prosperous economy is associated with industrial development, which requires an enormous amount of energy source and raw materials. Therefore, the more developed an economy becomes, the more its environment is exploited and the more fumes is released from manufacturing operation, which is causing problems including global warming and air pollution. Secondly, as a consequence of more advanced economy, citizens with higher standard living have increasingly great demand for consumer goods, thereby the quantity of waste produced will rapidly climb. For example, plastic consumption per capita in VietNam went up sharply from 3,8 kg per year to 41,3 kg per person between 1990 and 2018.
On the other hand, countries have also realized the importance of environmental protection. Thanks to tremendous capital capability, first-world nations have been applying their breakthrough in science and technology in figuring out measures to curb adverse impacts of economic expansion on the nature. In fact, scientists have found alternative energy sources such as wind and solar energy which are environmentally-friendly yet can fulfil the needs of people. Furthermore, governments can invest in green industries and encourage inhabitants to use green goods.
In conclusion, even though it is argued that environmental damage is unavoidable due to the acceleration in economic development, it is possible if humans to take action to increase the use of alternative energy and encourage recycling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64163822526 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26334480699 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4868252438 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125745350954 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423011836692 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332916989965 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732827875392 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336683046065 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.