The extinction of particular species of animals and plants is valued significantly by some people since this is the major environmental issue as their concern, whereas others negate this viewpoint since there are other issues of that overweigh the extinction far away. The ecosystem is combined with all of living species as well as resources in the world, thus we should consider not only the loss of these animals and species as the major problem but also the other paramount problems. I will address my disscusions and idea as follows.
To begin with, I will never deny that the exctinction of special living species contributes to the environmental issues a lot. In an integrate ecosystem, every kind of animals and plants has their own position, there is a perfect balance kept by the effort of them. Once some particular species disappears, the balance will be broken, this unstable condition would trigger the a sequence of actions by the food chain like Domino Cards. The consequence is unpredictable. Even if the balance may be recovered again for years. The other species including human-beings will pay for it without the certain recovery time.
On the other hand, on how much degree will the extinction affect the environment is in doubt, maybe regional issue since there is no obvious global environmental problem caused by the extinctions. However, the serious living environment has already become on of most important issues obstacts our development. Because there are other more important issues on that. Air pollution in China, for instance, cuased more people sufferring from lung cancer.Moreover, Water pollution in India also brings much more hygien problems to local people, some of the the polluted water as well as the over ferfilizaition even polluted the water underground. These problems are all dangerous to human lives.
In all I contend that we should take all of these problem seriously as not just one of these issues affects the environemnt we are living today. THere are so many pollutions problems as well as the cimate change. We should not consider the extinction only.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s to the environmental issues a lot. In an integrate ecosystem, every kind of animals and pl...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
..., this unstable condition would trigger the a sequence of actions by the food chain l...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ortant issues obstacts our development. Because there are other more important issues o...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...more people sufferring from lung cancer.Moreover, Water pollution in India also brings m...
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Line 5, column 541, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...h more hygien problems to local people, some of the the polluted water as well as the over ...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ygien problems to local people, some of the the polluted water as well as the over ferf...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ygien problems to local people, some of the the polluted water as well as the over ferf...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...ll I contend that we should take all of these problem seriously as not just one of these issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, kind of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82978427782 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1861991716 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.176470588 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268678691727 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746890531123 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519774965597 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15455439466 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528521719468 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s to the environmental issues a lot. In an integrate ecosystem, every kind of animals and pl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
..., this unstable condition would trigger the a sequence of actions by the food chain l...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ortant issues obstacts our development. Because there are other more important issues o...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...more people sufferring from lung cancer.Moreover, Water pollution in India also brings m...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 541, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...h more hygien problems to local people, some of the the polluted water as well as the over ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ygien problems to local people, some of the the polluted water as well as the over ferf...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ygien problems to local people, some of the the polluted water as well as the over ferf...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...ll I contend that we should take all of these problem seriously as not just one of these issu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, kind of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82978427782 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1861991716 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.176470588 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268678691727 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746890531123 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519774965597 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15455439466 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528521719468 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.