some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
what other things in life can make people happy?
give reasons for your answer and include in relevant examples from your knowledge or from experience
There is no doubt that money is significant and it is able to make people are happy, but life has another factor which can make people have a good mood, I would give reasons for both view in that essay.
Having more than enough money is crucial to entertain you. It makes you safe against the future when all people leave you alone, lose your job, has sick, and when you need it for your relatives. Secondly, you will be able to have fun like buy a car, a large house, new-brand clothes and eat expensive food. if you have a lot of money you will be able to relax when you retire or become old.
on another hand, I believe that there are a lot of things are necessary such as money. The first one is health which without it you will not be able to enjoy anymore. The second factor is family which means Sons, brothers, and parents. if you don't have a family you will be alone in this life and when you need help you will not find anybody there for you. I saw my grandfather do not care about money and when I asked him why? He told me that he had not ever seen money important but more than it that person be in touch with god.
In conclusion, happiness is around us in everything not only in a lot of money we can find it in a good trip a nice mail and in wife eyes. However, without it, we will suffer in our life and maybe nothing can replace it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10447761194 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99515940726 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548507462687 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7125534324 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6153846154 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262217550569 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927757507953 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778600457462 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180001161287 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801704289219 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.16 8.58950901804 72% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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