Modern era is the technology world. People are too indulged with their mobile phones. That is why, many people advocate that on piblic libraries, shops and on public vechiles, mobiles should be banned. Yhere are both merits and de-merits of this statement. I will clear my point in the upcoming passages.
To begin with, I want to indicate that now days everyone used mobile phones a lot even on the peaceful places like libraries, historical palce and so on. They should be banned because when anyone can used phones it distract other and divert their attention. When someones' phones tones ring very loudly it distrupt the peaceful nature of library. On shops, when anyone used mobile phone it distracted the whole line and creats some problems. In public vechiles when we talked loudly with our loved ones, it not seemed good. In music performance and peaceful places, when someone use mobile phones it distracted the enjoyment of others.
On the other hand, some calls are very important for instance, emergency calls and so on. If mobile phones are banned people will be not able to capture their precious moments with the new features(camera) of mobile phones.
To sum up, some people want mobile phones should be banned in public places. In my perspective, mobile phones not should be banned. Infact they follow some restrictictions. People set their mobile phones on vibrate and silent mode. By this method, they do not distrupt the others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...hould be banned because when anyone can used phones it distract other and divert the...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'distracts'?
Suggestion: distracts
... because when anyone can used phones it distract other and divert their attention. When ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tract other and divert their attention. When someones phones tones ring very loudly ...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it not seemed good. In music performance and peaceful places, when someone use mo...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...ance and peaceful places, when someone use mobile phones it distracted the enjoyme...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or instance, emergency calls and so on. If mobile phones are banned people will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98765432099 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44450679556 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551440329218 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9773584879 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353327194826 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111233942523 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108302319484 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226893054625 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807677359449 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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