Some people say modern innovation brings a lot more problem than benefits. Do you agree or disagree?
The world today has adapted to the existence of modern innovation and its many uses. Despite some short comings of technology, I believe the disadvantages cannot undermine the advantages. It is disagreed that modern innovation brings a lot more problem than benefits. This essay examines different benefits of modern innovation such as the ability of individuals and organizations to get tasks done faster and how the advancement of technology has made quality education more accessible to people all around the world.
Firstly, modern innovation gives individuals and organizations the ability to get tasks done faster. For example, restaurants can render satisfactory service due to the advent of gas cookers which therefore makes cooking less time consuming. Fortunately, this is something modern technology can simply provide. Thus, this makes it clear why modern innovation brings more benefits than problem.
Secondly, the advancement of technology has made quality education more accessible to people all around the world. For instance, lessons and tutorials can be held online using computers, laptops, and mobile phones. Such is a quality modern innovation possesses which outweighs its setbacks. As can be seen, this is a major aspect of modern innovation which proves why it has more merits than demerits.
In summary, modern innovation gives individuals and organizations the capability to carry out out their tasks speedily and enables people around the globe have access to quality education. Thus, it is clear why modern innovation cannot bring more problem than benefits. Consequently, it is predicted that the positive aspects of the debate over modern innovation will forever be stronger than the negative ones and because of this, there will be a continuous high demand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51811594203 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89478695855 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9510881075 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346891411377 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141987446068 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143884466738 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233318060712 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723118479856 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.