some people say that modern innovations have more harm than good? Do you agree or disagree?
Living in the 21st which have brought a lot of change in every field of life. It is controversial in this cotemporary era, in which a group of folks deem that the advance innovation has more effects than it’s good. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with the above foresaid question because it made our life easy and it also contributed in our life style.
Firstly, new discoveries which have made our life so easy because it have created such machines with which a person can see the disasters which will be soon occurred in the earth in which we are living. Furthermore, it tells us about the new planets which are similar to the globe. It contributed in the field of engineering just as the fertile rate is increasing on daily basis and the earth is congesting with the time so new innovations have created building like skyscrapers in which hundreds of families can get settle.
Secondly, it have played a good role in the production of fruits and vegetables because of biotechnology in which they can grow any sessional food in whole year. For instance, many moons ago mangoes were available at the in summer but now you can also get mangoes in winter as well due to new discoveries.
People who were having severe illness like aids, sugar and cancer so with the help of fresh technology scientists have created vaccines to cure such diseases. Additionally, automatic vacuums and laundry machines are made which help the women in cleaning homes and clothes. As well as those women who are paralyzed and they are unable to stand by own to clean the crockery so innovates have created a robot which clean the cookery.
In conclusion, new innovations will have disadvantages but it have more advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75919732441 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67123391983 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5540628011 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156676281062 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657947182132 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592925558399 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106607388867 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539947164266 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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