Some people say that modern technology gas made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There exists an opinion that technology has brought many benefits to shopping. Others argue that the development of technology has made shopping become more complicated than it used to be. In this essay, I am going to analyze both views before stating my personal perspective.
On the one hand, modern technology really makes an enormous contribution to help people purchase conveniently. Consumers can have chances to buy products just with a click of mouse. The ordered items will be delivered as quickly as possible. Payment is also simple because the majority of online stores allow the customers to pay in multiple ways such as cash, credit card or dedicated apps. Besides, many e-commerce sites are equipped with a system of professional consultants to help the customers get the best choice without consuming too much time. If the buyers do not want to receive advices from these staffs, they can have a reference to the feedbacks of other people who have already experienced.
On the other hand, the truth with the emergence of technology is that people can face up with several online shopping problems. The most common issue is that the consumers’ personal information like phone number, private passwords and so on is leaked causing a lot of big financial losses. For example, some people lose a large amount of money just after a click to the virtual shops. Another matter is about the quality of the products. People are hard to have the exact evaluation based on the general look through the pictures on the Internet. In many situations, the delivered goods are quite distinct from these images making the buyers disappointed.
From my perspective, I think applying technology to shopping has both pros and cons. It seems impossible to define the benefits or the drawbacks outweigh the other as it completely depends on the experience of each person.
In conclusion, only users can decide whether technology development has made shopping easier or more difficult. Therefore, the consumers should pay more attention when they do shopping online.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, really, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12721893491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75987298949 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609467455621 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.790952066 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2105263158 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205207280859 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553730854389 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539177570312 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11709604133 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422044049041 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, really, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12721893491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75987298949 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609467455621 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.790952066 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2105263158 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205207280859 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553730854389 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539177570312 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11709604133 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422044049041 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.