Some people say that money can make life easier and morecomfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money?

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Some people say that money can make life easier and more
comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money?

It is true that the argument of whether to have a prosperous life with a vast amount of money or not remains a source of controversy in society. While I accept that there are benefits and drawbacks of this debate, I would argue that it is better to have an adequate budget to manage one’s life.
The trend decision having a lot of money is advantageous to some extent. The main result is that people are free from worries, including bills and expenses. A good example of this is that it would be beneficial for those from developing countries to have access to educational conditions in wealthy countries requiring a sustainable budget to afford. In addition, money makes it easier than ever for rich people to access private-owned services. This is particularly the case for those who are receiving healthcare service as a way to remedy their disease because not all state-owned healthcare services in many parts of the world are excellent.
On the other hand, I believe that having a lot of money has some specific disadvantages. Firstly, from a psychological perspective, people are more likely to be materialists when they have a great deal of money. This phenomenon leads to the fact that one may find it hard to form long-lasting relationships with rich people because they are nervous about he or she betrays their trust to take money. Secondly, the rich never want they have less money. With having a limited amount of money, they may lose their peace of mind to be more prosperous.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there are several demerits for being rich, although this notion has some notable merits

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82437275986 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80511235709 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7473379934 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271650992667 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115419090215 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091017356912 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145001637941 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673242154939 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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