Some people say material possessions are very useful in bringing us happiness, but others argue that they are useless in terms of providing happiness. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
From the ancient time hitherto, humankind has been in pursuit of happiness. Although possessing precious things is believed to provide people with the feelings of satisfaction, I am more likely to think that spiritual values cannot be bought with cash and strong arguments exist in support of both sides of this debate.
On the one hand, many people in modern civilization are materialists. It is irrefutable that money is appealing in terms of acquisition such as fame, property, and social status. For example, people are craving for social position and money, which enable them to be the middle class or even upper class. These people may define happiness as the feeling that they can buy anything they want to meet their needs. Also, respect from other people may make materialists delight.
On the other hand, other people keep a clear perspective in money cannot buy the quality of relationships and physical condition. In fact, a strong bond in a relationship plays an essential role in bringing bliss, which is more meaningful than having a lot of money. For instance, Nguyen Vu-one of the billionaires in Vietnam, who struggles with his wife because of property and custody of their children, cannot find pleasure from his family. Moreover, people need health to maintain their life. Without good physical well-being, possessing precious things is pointless.
In conclusion, with the reasons stated above, I think that genuine happiness derives from a strong bond relationship and an excellent physical status, not possessing precious things
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27309236948 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77704962957 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618473895582 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6089279856 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136185095767 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471709538603 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268931502219 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757666306373 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336481062763 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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