Some people say that "Money has universal power". Do you agree with this opinion?
In today’s civilized and modern world, the predominant value of money has long become a bone of contention. There exists a prevailing belief that money holds such ubiquitous potency that it is involved in almost all social practices. I wholeheartedly concur with this assertion regarding the vital impact money exerts on society’s progress, which this essay will expound on.
Advocates support the aforementioned notion that money is essential in every facet of life including their worldview, life choices, actions, and wellness. This perspective is comprehensible as money can give us freedom and security by providing a multitude of choices, thereby enabling us to live where we want, fulfill our needs, and indulge in our interests. Being financially dependent means people can make their own decisions without being affected by external factors. Otherwise, they may easily succumb to a lack of money in the future, which results in other issues like health problems, food or shelter shortage, etc.
Another elemental merit of money is that it is a universal medium of exchange that, from the dawn of civilization, has acted as a prominent key to trade people’s labor for goods. Thanks to money, people don’t have to hope someone else wants to give them something they need in exchange for something they have available to trade. Everyone recognizes that money has value, so they can trade it for whatever goods or services they desire. Ultimately, this process increases market liquidity, which refers to how easily assets can be purchased or sold.
In closing, deeming money’s magnificent role, I align with those who opine that it is an indispensable invention of life, which acts as a cornerstone of trading and a catalyst for societal progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25795053004 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86379573727 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660777385159 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3519739546 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173375743662 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059966301601 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344917006896 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100685572572 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290134080838 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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