Nowadays, music has gradually become part of people’s everyday lives to the extent that it’s hard to think about living without its existence. This leads to the idea that music is a good way of bringing people together despite of their age and cultural backgrounds. I strongly believe this statement for two main reasons.
First of all, music lifts language barriers and leaves cultural differences aside. The love for music can be seen at any place where people from different countries or backgrounds are brought together and they happen to share the same taste for music. For instance, a couple of years ago I was in Toronto with my boyfriend and we came across a pub where live music was playing. As fans of live music, we decided to give it a try. By eavesdropping some conversations, we noticed that many of the customers were foreigners like us. After a while, the song ‘Piano man’ came along. Surprisingly, all the people there started singing and raising their glasses, looking at each other and nodding as a sign of approval. Although we all spoke different languages, everyone seemed to connect through the soothing melody, lyrics and rhythm.
Furthermore, music has the power to bring generations closer together. In spite of the age, strong melodies or relatable lyrics can make people feel the same way. To exemplify this, I think of the song ‘Don’t stop me now’ by Queen. Freddie's memorable and stunning voice, the grooving rhythm and catching lyrics make people want to dance and sing along, instantaneously. Even though it's an 80s song, everyone enjoys it. In this way, music seems to bridge all generations together.
To conclude, music has become a vital part of our lives. It can help us to connect to people and most importantly, to create bonds, regardless of all ages and cultural backgrounds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, while, for instance, i think, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70443436887 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8533065679 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4210526316 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303525138928 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849306026091 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920788886601 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188332709794 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498786931781 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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