he prompt asserts that according to some people for creating brotherhood among people of different cultures and ages music is a good medium. My opinion on this regard aligns with the prompt almost completely.
Music is an art whose origin goes back to the time when language was invented among ancient people. For centuries people not only have been entertained by songs and music, they also have communicated and exchanged ideas through this art. Often people listen to songs written in different languages without understanding the lyrics, but can relate to the tunes and emotions expressed by them. Also, musicians play an significant role by expressing various social, political and global issues in their compositions and creating awareness among all the people in the world. For instance, by listening the song Bella Chao of Spain people all around the world once came to know about the socio-economic struggles of the peasants of that country. Moreover, choice of music does not depend on age. There are songs equally loved and enjoyed by people of all ages. Enjoying music together is one of activities that a family or society consisting people belonging to different age groups often do.
However, there are numerous forms of arts and activities that bring people of all ages and societies together. As for example, sports play one of the greatest roles in establishing global friendship and brotherhood. Every year world tournaments of different games and sports are held which are equally celebrated in most of the countries. Even different elements of arts and cultures such as paintig, sculpting, dancing, reciting, etc work towards the goal of bringing different kinds of people together. But not any of such activities and arts can replace music as a bridge between one person to another. With time the art of music has evolved and it will continue to remain versatile which will connect people of various ages and cultures together.
In conclusion, music not only brings joy, entertainment and refresment in people's, it also helps to create bondings among the people of same and different societies and among people of all the age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1388101983 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66842291703 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546742209632 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3026637713 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.705882353 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358275232742 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118478140678 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100305756156 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238944813032 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241539852722 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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