Some people say that music is good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music plays an important role in people’s life. Many people believe that music is an ideal way to connect with people of various cultures and ages. I strongly agree with this view and will clarify in this essay below.
To begin with, many international musical shows attract crowds from different nations and connect with each other. That means it help visitor understand the local culture by connect its citizens and participate in musical events. For example, in India, Bollywood musical events attract audience from many countries in the world. These tourists stay in India for few months to learn more about India music. As a result, they become friends with locals. Therefore, it is clear that music can bring people of multiple cultures come closer.
Furthermore, music is an indispensable part of community culture. That means there are types of music which are loved by people of all ages and it helps them connect with each other. For instance, Indian folk and classical music is an essential part of festival activities. It becomes a bridge to help residents come closer, help children, adults, and elder, all come together listen to it. Thus, if there is no music, it would be difficult for people of different age groups connect with each other.
From 2 paragraphs above, it is evidence that music creates the best space to connect with individuals of various cultures and ages through international, folk musical events. Therefore, I firmly believe that music should be advertised in any forms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... connect with each other. That means it help visitor understand the local culture by...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usic should be advertised in any forms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52887643035 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8184578419 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29464616113 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105020236925 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757657524239 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197262296946 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709845754474 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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