Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, music is enjoyed by almost anyone around the world. Some believe that it is effective in terms of connecting individuals together, regardless of their cultural backgrounds and ages. I completely agree with this statement and will provide examples and explanations to justify this opinion.
It is undeniable that the impact of music on people’s feelings does not depend on whether or not they know what the song is about but rather on the mood of the music. When we listen to a song with sad melodies, the way we perceive the sadness is universal. This remains true even when we do not understand the meaning of the song’s lyrics. Conversely, when a song is uplifting, it can bring energy to the listeners without its literal meaning being understood at all. Thus, the fact that music affects the feelings of people worldwide the same way shows that music can connect people from different cultures and ages.
While a song’s melodies can have effects on our emotions, the lyrics brings the tale that the author of the song had put in it closer to the audience if the song has one. The lyrics’ of all songs around the world serve the same purpose: to help people understand the story behind the songs. For foreign audience, using a translator is all it takes to understand most of a lyrics, which will effectively convey the meaning of the song, even when its culture is very different from that of the listeners. This is because lyrics usually have words and sentences that are chosen in such a poetic way that it expresses much meaning without having a large word count. Lyrics, together with the tunes will help different groups people have the same understanding about the song.
In conclusion, music is very effective at connecting people together with its expressive melodies and poetic lyrics whether its audience are similar in culture and age or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...on people’s feelings does not depend on whether or not they know what the song is about but ra...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lyric' or simply 'lyrics'?
Suggestion: a lyric; lyrics
...r is all it takes to understand most of a lyrics, which will effectively convey the mean...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85981308411 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55789610124 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520249221184 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0859408404 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230966655594 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817007228745 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733638595369 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142455223594 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517381032868 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.