Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different ages and cultures goes together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is strongly believed that music can unite people regardless ages and cultural backgrounds. While I am convinced by the idea that music is a clue to attach people, I also think that there are some distant interests that this type of arts cannot connect.
On the one hand, I do not doubt that the power of music which can connect people whose different ages and cultures. First and foremost, music expresses human emotion such as love, jealousy and patriotism, so timeless songs can inspire people and make them become closer. For instance, I believe that people irrespective of generation and nationality would share the same feelings which are happy or moving when listening to the “Happy New Year” performed by the ABBA band. Moreover, each person has his own memories about a particular song or kinds of music. Hence, if he shares his memories with others, they can get bond and learn more about traditions in a specific time or country.
On the other hand, I also think that sometimes music cannot reach across age and national boundaries. From the age perspective, there is gap between generations which leads to conflict about which is the right song to love. World has changed day by day; therefore some contemporary types of music such as rock and ballad can feed up the interests of youngsters but can be underestimated by elderly. From the cultural backgrounds perspective, a few of foreigners cannot be interested in traditional songs of a country. For example, some tourists coming to my hometown, which is an heritage site, will choose to spend a night in bar instead of enjoying a traditionally instrumental performance.
In conclusion, although sometimes music cannot bring different people together, I strongly agree that people from different generations and traditions can be connected by this wonderful art.
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'backgrounds'' or 'background's'?
Suggestion: backgrounds'; background's
...estimated by elderly. From the cultural backgrounds perspective, a few of foreigners cannot...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ourists coming to my hometown, which is an heritage site, will choose to spend a n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07920792079 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84211883058 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3077716097 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219720250391 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839867075554 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795450506864 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158437139334 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585870587878 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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