Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is frequently argued that the music is reckoned to be the thing which is able to connect people no matter what is their age or culture. So, I completely disagree with this statement by the virtue of numerous grounding motives.
Firstly, as we know each culture has its own identities that are extremely unique when compared to others. By the courtesy of that we can not put together variable cultures with the aid of music, since the national musics of one culture is totally incompatible with others one. For instance, musics that are commonly listened in China could be not appealing at all for the people who live in Russia because of the way it has written.
Secondly, when it comes to the age profile we can say that music is not capable of gathering people and keeping them together as well. The reason why I think like this is that the music listened by young generation is absolutely different from the music which is preferred by old bracket. As an example, nowadays youth sticks with the sorts of the music like rock and jazz whereas old people are more tend to listen retro and classical music. So, without any doubt I can say that if someone would offer to their grandparents to listen the rock music with the high percentage of the possibility they would dislike it.
In conclusion, I can say that music is not the thing which is able to bring people together both in terms of age and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58661417323 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42615854232 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.440322325 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338276956373 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130839202023 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586376913302 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211719832655 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238579631329 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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