In recent years, there has been considerable discussion about how music has been gradually becoming part of people’s daily routine. This discussion has led to a suggestion that music is a good way of bringing people together regardless of ages and cultures. In my opinion, I completely subscribe to the idea to a large extent for two reasons.
To begin with, music removes/eliminates/lifts the language barriers and blurs the cultural differences. The magic of music usually happens in a scenario where people from different countries or backgrounds share the similar taste of music, and my father’s experience can attest to this. My father, who is a non-native speaker of English, has a Canadian friend who has the same music taste as my father does. Being fans of George Strait, they are both obsessed with country music. Despite the fact that they speak different languages and sometimes find it difficult to get their messages across, they can communicate with each other through the dulcet melodies and tunes.
In addition, music also has an amazing ability to connect people from different generations. Regardless of age, people might be moved by a memorable melody, a strong rhythm or a beautiful singing voice, while the best songs seem to have the same magical effect on all of us. For instance, Beethoven’s music has been popular with people with different ages for centuries. Its symphony evokes a wide range of human feelings such as power and happiness, hope and aspiration; in other words, music is able to bridge the age gap, bringing the old and young together.
To recapitulate, music is one of the most powerful weapons for people to build up a close bond, regardless of cultural backgrounds or ages. Transcending the worldly barriers, music effectively spreads the universal messages to us. Hence, music provides people with easy access to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10064935065 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94040966932 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1027712437 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305689494955 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106629483915 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869029247453 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192046159 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490916938782 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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