Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of all ages and cultures together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is said that music is a vital part in our life when helping people of all ages and cultures become closer to each other. In my view, although music can give us a positive effect, we should not dismiss some other ways.
On the one hand, for a variety of reasons, music is beneficial in humane relationship. Firstly, it brings people from every corner of the world together. Music is an unlimited source of information about all aspects in our life. For example, many countries have some certain songs which witness special events in the past so that listening to these songs can help us understand more about the history of this nation. Secondly, music is also an asset which stimulates interaction between people of all ages. For instance, some traditional songs can make it easy for young generation to discover many interesting things about the elderly's lifestyles as well as their favorite.
On the other hand, music is not the only way to help people become more close-knit. Take for example: the writing works. Young people can read some novels, books which were written by many writers from the previous generation to have more knowledge about older people's thoughts and feelings.
In conclusion, despite some benefits that music gives to us, i believe that other ways are still useful and should not be forgotten.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-27 | thuytram210598 | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-12 | Khanhlinh09 | 56 | view |
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 40
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as pratical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of all ages and cultures together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e some benefits that music gives to us, i believe that other ways are still usefu...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87168141593 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47784845117 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7873835161 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234905545087 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907787595398 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599227863337 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143338612485 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318979399497 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.