Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child ' s development . however other say that thigs like to television or friend have the most important influence on them . discuss both side and give your opinion .
Children are the most volueable gift of God to parents .they are the backbone and wilder of nation . few people thikg that parents have play important role in a chid life for development . however , other sau that television and friend a play significant role in chil life . this essay intends to high light both side argument without and prejudice and my opinion at least .
First and foremost , children are smile hapeen in the front on the parents . they are a first teacher in their children .they are teach culture and morel value . and children are receptive mind .they can gain easily and they are follow according to their parents baheviour . they karn many thing in their parents . such as good manner , gods baheviour so on . parents are help to any time their children . they are help to study and ane problem . as a result parents are important for children life .
On the other hand , friends and television have most important for children because they are age a certain age .they are involved friend company and they are follow the friend . they learn many things their friend and they are copy their friend . moreover , children are remain glued to television they are watch many different type of programs . and they follow the statzy of hero and they are do behavior according to TV programs . so television and friend play important role in children life .
In my opinion , both are important in children for development . but I think parents are good for children than to television and friend
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, at least, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85546875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43119343751 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44921875 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5867534212 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4210526316 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172704490255 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674758859979 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585189599423 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141132679328 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721495128333 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.58950901804 72% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.