Some people say part-time jobs are useful for full-time students because they have not only earn money but also gain career experience. Do you agree or disagree?
Topic 4:
Nowadays, more students are doing part-time jobs while being at university because working along beside studies would give them favorable opportunities. some people say that part-time jobs are useful for full-time students because they not only earn money but also gain career experience. I totally agree with this idea, I will give some reasons to approve this.
Firstly, working would help students fill gaps in their knowledge, especially for practical knowledge which they may not acquire completely at their schools. Secondly, taking part-time jobs is a great chance for students to get their jobs in the future. For example, final-year economic students should apply for a part-time job as a trainee in different companies to get experience to learn how to deal with customers or the best way goods selling as more as possible. Thirdly, students could earn money to afford their living and tuition fee.
In conclusion, I believe that students should do part-time jobs because they could get valuable working experience along with great income for their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44186046512 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57300122744 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.408343808 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4790130002 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228055035013 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235839788296 0.0667982634062 353% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341345137746 0.151304729494 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160747893968 0.056905535591 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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