Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion
Nowadays, it gets more and more difficult for students to choose between attending university and getting a job straight after graduating from high school. This essay will mention about advantages and disadvantages both points.
It is clear that getting a university degree, which means that students must study and increase their knowledge of principle major. They not only have more opportunities to work with highly qualified lecturers but also work in a favorable learning environment. There are some occupations requiring diploma such as a doctor, a pilot, a lawyer. Besides, passing general education certificate exam is one of many young student’s expectations as well as great pride to the family.
However, getting a job after school helps students have more options to choose a career. On the contrary, going on university takes much money from family's support. They can earn and save their money for their needs. They also afford to travel abroad and buy their own house earlier. It estimated that studying in college costs more than 300 million Vietnam Dong, huge mount money that they can do different things.
In my view, I prefer to go to university because I want a stable job with the right major in the future. It seems to me that I have an unforgettable experienced student which I do not want to miss.
In conclusion, there are many benefits and drawbacks of getting a job or attending university, so students should thoroughly consider which is the best option for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05241935484 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78887420455 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.806828441 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155935954493 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507031837809 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503191836575 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851907562164 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361875436271 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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