Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is a debatable issue that who should take the responsibility to take care of the environment whether it should be done by the locals or the government. Many people opine that it is the responsibility of locals whereas opponents say that the government should take care of the environment. This essay will discuss both the views along with my opinion.
On the one hand, global warming has taken place so it is necessary to take care of environment by the people, First and Foremost, it is because of use of plastic bags, noise pollution and there is a rise in industrial sector. So, the people are the one who have to save the environment by avoiding such things. Secondly, the locals have to keep their surrounding clean by putting the waste in dustbin. For instance, by throwing the garbage in the public area then it will directly affect to environment but if the garbage is thrown in dustbin, then the municipality will collect the waste and it will save environment.
On the other hand, the government plays a vital role to take care of environment. Firstly, the authority should ban the industries which produces air pollution and noise pollution. For instance, the XYZ Pvt. Ltd. Company in United Kingdom produces the goods with high quality but at the same time it also produces noise and air pollution so the government of United Kingdom ban that company to save environment. Secondly, the government should avoid deforestation and has to start afforestation. By this there will be more trees grown the global warming can be reduced.
To conclude, although to take care of environment is the responsibility of people by using dustbins, I believe it is also the responsibility of government to avoid deforestation and start afforestation to reduce global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95016611296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97437761883 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461794019934 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2367744044 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245406308165 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856661356323 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068087428465 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165523075943 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907722352375 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.