Some people say that self employment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both point of view. What is your opinion?
What exercise is to the body, employment is to the mind and morals.with the steady growth in industrilization, the lifestyle of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved various milestones.nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that, which is considered suitable enviornment for human; self employment or job? Through this eassy, i shall explore the dimension of this topic through example and assertion and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people believe that, self employment is good. The strengthen their view point by claiming that, because peson has fully freedom; he performed there dicision own wish. Flexibal working hours increased and he has is no worry about work. A good illustration of this for instance: a survey conducted by hindustan times it proved that self employment is good as compair to working for a company.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who beleive that working for a company or institition is best or not? to make their arguments convincing they claim that it improves the ethics of the person .it helps to maintain the proper schedule rule and regulation would be the perfect example of this person improve their atiquetes for instance discplined, punctuality, team work and fixed working hours. A survey conducted by indian goverment it proved that it help to all rounder development of the people.
Nevertheless, weighing both the option, i believe that there is no single conclusion. Still, i take this ground that on effective clap require both use of hand, those are help too good employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, still, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1155234657 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97588127424 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5902711298 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245582918801 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779126359283 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496570558325 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126680433886 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562244800007 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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