It is clear that sports plays an important role in our life. That helps us for our health. But many people think differently. It is just nothing more than a leisure activity. From my point of view, I agree with these ideas and I'll discuss it.
As You know, the sport gives us a lot of advantage. First, the biggest usefulthing i improve and develop physical and mental health, to help us have a healthy body and avoid unwanted diseases such as heart problems, osteoarthritis, obesity,..... In addition, youths will be improved about when they do physical exercise. The next point that supports this idea is that sports can also helps us to reduce a lot of time to spend on mobile phones and other services. And the government needs to have a policy on fitness services for resident.
The second point is that it just entertainment games. Likely, parents and their kids play sports after hard-working day and parents just teach for children about sports games. Athlete also play sports training for competition. There fore, sports is just a leisure activity.
Generally, sports not only a useful activity but also free time to relax, so we need to have play sports to make our health better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...nt of view I agree with these ideas and Ill discuss it As You know the sport gives...
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Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...advantage First the biggest usefulthing i improve and develop physical and mental...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Therefore
...so play sports training for competition There fore sports is just a leisure activity Gene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in addition, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61352657005 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37973583907 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 207.0 20.2975951904 1020% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 955.0 106.682146367 895% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 207.0 20.7667163134 997% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 64.0 7.06120827912 906% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228344908831 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228344908831 0.084324248473 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148552782505 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104714482131 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 103.8 13.0946893788 793% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -121.71 50.2224549098 -242% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 81.7 11.3001002004 723% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.95 8.58950901804 197% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.8 10.1190380762 838% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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