People have a divergent outlooks towards the sports activities several masses think about that games plays a vital role in the society, whereas other controvert the same and say that sports are activity which is only play in spare time. I will discuss both the view pints and give my valid justification.
commence with, sports play a crucial role in the individuals lives. To elaborate, a person wants three main things in life such as, health , wealth and fame so the sports gives all of this if a person doing sports inn the regular basis then they stay healthy and fit. The biggest sportsmen are earned a plenty of money and they gained love and fame from the audiences. For instance, a survey conducted by nccs in Canada in 2020 which revealed that the players earned more than big entrepreneur. Hence, the life expectancy also increase if we play a outdoor games.
On the other hand, sports are just free time activities . In the other words , if we do not take the game serious then we do not get successful in those game then it is just leisure part. to exemplify, the cogent reason behind it we feel bored and tired then we do games so this is just a spare time activity.
From my point of view , I agree with the former statement owing to sports not just a time pass field. When we play a game we stay a fit and stay away from the fatal disease such as obese.
To conclude, the civic bodies should focus on the games
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, then, whereas, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47709923664 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29455465432 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0306375665 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2307692308 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207392161414 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727890795474 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712423729363 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107983461715 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108179327414 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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