some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. do you agree or disagree about this opinion
It is argued that wild animals and birds are drawing too many concerns and resources from the public. Personally, I completely agree with this point of view
There are two main reasons why I think people have paid too much attention to the protection of wild animals. Firstly, many non-governmental organizations have been established in order to protect animals across the world. However, they are too concerned about animal-related activities. For example, it is unreasonable that PTA, an animal-protecting organization, accused Katy Perry of using tigers and lions for commercial purposes which she did not. Secondly, news about illegal activities related to animals can be shared rapidly on the internet. If a bear is imprisoned somewhere, this news will be widespread on social media such as TV or the internet on a large scale immediately.
In addition, people also have spent too many resources preserving birds. A great deal of money has been required to carry out any project, in which infrastructure and scientific research are the two most expensive. The more difficult research to preserve the DNA of endangered birds, the more it costs. Furthermore, the expenditure for these project is quite unnecessary to some extent. While funds should be raised to tackle the problems which directly affect human's living standards such as famine or drought, investment in bird protection appears to be the waste of money.
In conclusion, It seems to me that both concerns and resources are spent too much on protecting animals and bird in society nowadays
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-09 | Phạm Phú Trường | 61 | view |
| 2019-08-31 | Saeedeamani | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-31 | Saeedeamani | 61 | view |
| 2019-08-31 | Saeedeamani | 67 | view |
| 2019-08-31 | Saeedeamani | 67 | view |
- It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. to what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds do you agree or disagree with this opinion 87
- many people go to university for academic study. more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. to what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays young people admire sports stars though they often do not set a good example What do you think 89
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagr 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion appears to be the waste of money. In conclusion, It seems to me that both ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2390438247 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05645467948 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6648251457 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333480693921 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112529418895 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954449817652 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203466213419 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501847100683 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.