prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. however, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. agree or disagree
Many people believe that the reduction of crime could be achieved if imprison sentences are applied. Others argue that education is the better solution. In my opinion, the roles of two solutions above are equally significant.
On the one hand, Imprisonment is one of the most efficient ways of dealing with the increasing number of crime for several reasons. Firstly, It is necessary to show offenders that they will face with the loss of freedom and social isolation if they commit crimes. In this way, people will be afraid of the law and avoid doing illegal activities. Secondly, citizens pay tax for the government to ensure that they will be safe in public or even at home. Thus, it is government's responsibilities to imprison criminals to create the safe environment for people to live.
On the other hand, educating young children and offenders should not be underestimated. The mindset of schoolchildren might not be mature enough to distinguish whether a particular activity is legal or not. To be more specific, children might be involved in the transportation of drugs if they are not educated about this problem at school. Furthermore, in prison, educational programs should aim to provide skills and qualifications for prisoners so that they will have jobs after releasing, which, as a result, reduces the rate of reoffending
In conclusion, I think that imprisonment should cooperate with education not only for children but prisoners to provide the practical solution of reducing crime
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Comments
Nowadays, crime is increasing
Nowadays, crime is increasing day by day and in some countries prison is the very common way to reduce this problem whereas education is most effective way then prison others think. I partially agree with the statement and going to discuss both views in looping paragraphs.
There are number of reasons that education is the best way to reduce crimes in countries. The first and the foremost reason is that, if people are getting knowledge then they definitely become aware about the bad happening and this is without any doubt beneficial because, when they get aware of crimes and they know what will be the result if they do so then they might not commit crimes. For instance, people do not know that having sex below 16 years of age is crime. That's why they do so. At the same time the other main reason might be unemployment. Like, people get education, they definitely get Job opportunities. This is without any doubt beneficial because the main reason behind crimes is that people are not educated and they need to do something to survive. So, if they are busy in their work and having good jobs, then automatically crimes may be reduced.
On the other side of the argument, prison is also a good way to reduce crime. the main reason behind this could be that if the person is put behind the bars who committed crime and be punished very strictly, due to which the other person become aware and always think twice before committing any criminal activity. Moreover, if the person is behind the bars and the other people are aware them crime would take place any more in the country and also the country becomes crime-free.
To wrap up, I would pen down by saying that, education and prison both are the good ways to reduce the crime. Because both are the things due to which people become aware.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18852459016 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04021023262 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594262295082 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2295909754 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166610183132 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536696308515 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450180453898 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110806104734 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369568073509 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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