Prison is the common way in most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
In most nations, felons are generally incarcerated to grapple with the increasing rate of the offense; while, it is believed that quality and higher academic studies can eradicate this issue. I strongly disagree with the statement because punishment serves as the best way to tackle the rising problem.
First of all, imprisonment can cause fear amongst the perpetrators, which can deter them from committing a felony. It is evident that anyone will refrain from doing illicit activities if they will have to bear the consequence of their actions. For instance, according to recent data, unlawful practices have been reduced up to 90% after promulgating strict laws and policies in China, and now it is considered the safest country. That is why it is crucial to sentence criminals with a severe penalty to curb the soaring lawbreaking acts.
Secondly, harassment, murder, and sexual abuse result from either revenge or physical urges, which have nothing to do with the quality study. It cannot be denied that vengeance provokes people to do unimaginable things. Also, several victims have been molested or raped at their workplaces too. According to the statistics, many accused crooks of assault or murder are educated and financially stable. Therefore, excellent teaching can only make a learner intellectual and still leave a person vulnerable to commit a crime.
To conclude, it is advocated by the experts that it is vital to convict the criminals to decrease the crime ratio because education is merely a source of knowledge and has not been proved to be a credible solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cated and financially stable. Therefore, excellent teaching can only make a learn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19455252918 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79269567203 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665369649805 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5149483515 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125508511585 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419048441248 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382720656207 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724246753236 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037145230124 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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