The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat.
what can be done to maintain biodiversity
Protection of Flora and fauna are of utmost importance now because of the dramatic rise in the lives of nature. there are many factors which are responsible for this cause. In the forthcoming paragraphs, the reasons and prevention measures will be discussed.
there is no doubt that industries fumes and disposed waste in water have caused the ecosystem imbalance, In past few years, surge in global warming level and afforestation have made the survival of ocean and land life difficult, consequently, harming the vegetation, aquatic as well as terrestrial animals. For example, if pollution level was curbed long ago, dodo bird would not have gone extinct. Plastic bags thrown in the ocean are lethal and has killed innumerable fishes and other water life. Most of the human beings are indifferent towards the damaging effects on earth these uncivilised ways are doing.
In order to safeguard plants and the endangered species who are vulnerable, strict measures should be taken. Like, felling of trees should be reduced, in addition to that people should be educated on the importance of tree plantation. All the factories can be moved far away from the areas where mother nature is not afflicted. For instance, a law was passed in few countries to move the manufacturing units to keep the sea life and unmitigated penalty was levied on those who flout the rules and regulations. As a result drastic improvement was noticed, saved river from contamination.
To conclude, maintenance of ecological balance is crucial to our planet. Although it seems inevitable to completely eradicate the root cause of this problem, however, its detrimental Impact can surely be subdued by joint endeavours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22262773723 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86492630968 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671532846715 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4989458502 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136604565424 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431023901014 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047970967067 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741390509065 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391314548106 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.