Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is the statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

Holiday season brings out infestation of tourists to abroad countries. At this time, some destinations reach to their peak in amount of tourists. So the native inhabitants should be prepared to embrace the tourists and to provide them some needs such as food and accommodation. Further more, by this way government will increase the income and this increase automatically will be spent on municipal processes. But some natives believe that these tourists impact the culture of their country negatively. I believe that their beliefs are based on their own few experiences, so there would not be just negative impacts. Also, there could be some positive effects on economy and social deeds of the destination.
First we should know that some activities are common in one country, while it is known as a bad deed in the other country. So we could decide by considering this point. The tourist impacts will be different regarding to the inhabitants of the destination country. As most people believe, there are some negative effects. I would like to give some examples such as, clothing styles which is not common relating to natives culture, changes in speaking and communicating methods, etc. For example covering women`s hair is a law in my Islamic country, while it is optional in most European countries. When a European lady comes to visit my country, some native ladies will choose her style of wearing as their roll model and they will uncover their hair. Here the impact is negative. These impacts may be reverse too, i.e. the tourists may be affected by the natives. These are negative impacts on natural places too that are caused by abusing the natural sources.
On the other hand, we`v got positive effects. Most of the time, tourists opt their destinations by considering the variety and also the similarity of cultures and they also choose one which is most similar to their own culture. As a conclusion there would be fewer impacts, however the existing impacts will be positive. I can mention some good effects on social behaviors and deeds, fore example: paying attention to traffic lights while crossing the street, hoe to behave to costumers, etc. In addition to culture changes, we`v got economic growth too. When bunch of tourists travel to a country, they transfer foreign currency by purchasing goods and reserving accommodations. Also, the number of occupations will be increased.
So the reality of negative effects on culture is undeniable, but these tourists expand as an income in the same occasion. As conclusion of this statement, the changes and how people get influenced depend on their basement and personality. So the tourists factor is not effective just by itself, other factors are needed to impact a culture, even bad or well. Try to protect positive points of your culture, but when you want to improve the negative ones.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 525, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...ountry negatively. I believe that their believes are based on their own few experiences,...
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Line 1, column 619, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ere would not be just negative impacts. Also there could be some positive effects on...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould like to give some examples such as, clothing styles which is not common rela...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ition to culture changes, we'v got economical growth too. When bunch of tourists trav...
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Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ing goods and reserving accommodations. Also the number of occupations will be incre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 475.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05684210526 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7268920342 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498947368421 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3223438847 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9642857143 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152851083805 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448252801944 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481129382978 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108155228528 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426144727167 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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