Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is the statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
When holiday season is coming, the growth of tourists will expand the number. In the same time, some destinations of tourism also peak in numbers, so indigenous inhabitants have to get ready to serve for supplying their demand for tourism needs; accommodation, place, and food. What is more, government will increase the income from the numbers of visitors. However, I think people have to realize that there are some impacts from the number of tourism for a country.
Tourists believe that a wonderful view of a country can turn their life into a relaxing time to recover stressful. The cultural diversity, which derives from tribal or ethnic are the tourism destinations that possible to improve more income of a country. With the growing of tourists, the government also has a chance to raise the financial sources of a country, and to build public and health facilities; hospitals, roads and highways. Based on this example, I think that government should take much attention about its nature.
However, in reality, tourism contribute one of the huge nature problems of a country. It is because visitors who came from cities consider that they do not have to improve the surrounding. The main reason is because the tourist destinations are poor of policies, and there is no rule and official penalty for the infraction to obey, so some tourists tend to ignore the matter of environment impacts. For example, tourists in the beach who littered rubbish unable to get any sanctions, but they are free to go anywhere else.
In conclusion, the increasing of tourists, tourists seem as an impact of the nature problems, but tourists expand as an income in the same occasion. I think to decrease the impacts; every tourist should be given some introductions before entering a country by the government. With giving the introduction of a country to every visitor, it means tourism regards to obey the country’s rules and the penalties, so tourists tend more aware during travelling in every destination. I believe with this way, the purpose of clean nature obtains convenience.
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