There is no doubt that tourism has become a growing industry in many countries. It is fact that this sector brings for the country advantages, however, I believe that tourism also has negative effects on the nation.
To begin with, one of biggest problem is environmental issues. Nowadays, the various of hostels, resorts and roads has been built for tourism's services, leading to green tree has been cut as well as damage forest which called "Green Lung". Secondly, the common phenomenon is loss local traditions because locals might copy tourists' lifestyle. As an example, Vietnam temples stipulate that tank top and skirt has been forbidden. But, something is changed, a minority of foreigner goes to temples and they wear skirt. The locals also copy the way foreigner's dressing and are likely to use short-length clothes when they are in temples or pagodas.
Thus, the way reduces the negative effects that could be affected by tourists. Firstly, they should read the destination's rules carefully before they explore this place. Through this process, they could understand the rules and keep their mind to protect local culture. Additionally, visitors should raise the awareness about protecting the environment which is surrounding us. To do this, they have to throw trash in bins and right places so as keep the ecosystem will be cleaner and fresher.
All in all, I utterly believe that tourism places also have negative impacts like broke up the original culture of local society and caused the environment pollution. On the other hand, the way to decrease that phenomenon is tourists have to show good attitude wherever they are.
- Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time Others believe that it is more important to provide accomodation quickly and cheaply Discuss both there views and give your own opinion Give reason for you 79
- According to an international travel magazine many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s they return home with no experience of the local culture Why do you think this happen How 93
- The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 79
- Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is the statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the biggest'.
Suggestion: of the biggest
...cts on the nation. To begin with, one of biggest problem is environmental issues. Nowada...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, no doubt, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16044776119 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6272764053 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6101552008 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170255258337 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529504679825 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055947515462 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112052466235 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561770416084 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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