Some people say that video games are bad for both children and adults. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?
It is widely believed that video games have a detrimental influence on both children and adults. I somewhat agree with this opinion as they make people adapt an inactive lifestyles as well as lead to aggressive behaviors in children in real life.
The first one is that the proportion of sedentary lifestyles in modern society. This is due to the improvement of computer-based which lead to look at computer screen for a long time. For instance, according to a survey by an American research group in 2019, most people tend to play electronic games after working and refuse to take part in outdoor activities. This would cause physical health problems such as: obesity, depression and so on.
The second one is that good attitudes are forgotten, which is bad for adolescents. This is because their parents indulge their children too much. For example, when children play car-racing games then they may race their own vehicles or beat relatives in real life, which can result in accidents and bruises. This would cause mental health problems such as: suicidal
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the viewpoint that computer games causes more problems for modern society than it brings for us. Electronic games which promote the lifestyles of couch potatoes make children have bad behaviors.
- The charts below show the types of books that people in different positions in a trading company prefer to read Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Some people say that video games are bad for both children and adults Do you agree or disagree with that statement 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
...n as they make people adapt an inactive lifestyles as well as lead to aggressive behaviors...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ace their own vehicles or beat relatives in real life, which can result in accide...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08920187793 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66646001977 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615023474178 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9550986015 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5454545455 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229493638286 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822217309319 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056995054341 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153066209778 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677994119301 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.