some people spend most of their live living close to where they was born
Nowadays, it is believed some people spend most of their live living close to where they was born, in this essay I would examine the reason why few people to choose living near with their home where they were grown up and because more merit rather than demerit for some reasons
In the one hand, the main of benefit living nearby by home is they can communicate with their person easier than take far place. For example when parent need help or getting accident, they can come as soon as possible. As result they feel comfortable and not worried. It is important to runs it, it is due to will make a good relationship. Secondly, they recognize easier everywhere. For example when they want to afford something like foods, ingredients, furnitures and fixtures, they know that location where get it. Effect of that, we can look for more simple. The hence of that, necessary from person who start to living other place.
However, there are some drawback of this problem. Firstly, they have less experience. For instance, they do not know about other place which has different culture or less independence. It is due they just know their place. Secondly, they can not add the relationship. For example they will have a chance to add some friend in far place because widespread of relationship it is urgent. Outcome of that the circle of familiar person is small.
To sum up where I stand, I more advantage when civilization chosen place where ever the lived it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...ine the reason why few people to choose living near with their home where they were gr...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng other place. However, there are some drawback of this problem. Firstly, they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73725490196 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46619590882 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 86.8651748041 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406473666175 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948233225712 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126808576943 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266513189213 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197425582737 0.056905535591 347% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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