Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the commercial industry has been growing drastically to promote products and services to both adults and children. Some assert that any types of advertisements towards kids should be all forbidden. In my point of view, while some ads have bad influences on the young, I believe that advertising should be allowed to continue growing because of the benefits they offer.
To begin with, it is understandable why individuals want to eliminate the adverts which aim at children. Since there is an abundance of commercials on the media these days, the content of every advert cannot be fully reviewed by the authority. Therefore, in order to completely protect the kids from viewing unrated and inappropriate images or videos from ads, most parents would agree to have all advertising activities which gravitate towards children banned. Furthermore, banning these adverts could also keep the kids’ studying from distractions. Because companies usually put flashy pictures in their ads, children will keep remembering what they see and thus, they will not be able to concentrate on their study.
Fortunately, some advertisements might deliver great merits to young viewers. Firstly, since some companies’ intention is to give children useful and long-lasting messages, they will implement educational information in their adverts. Not only this benefits the sales of products but also carves knowledge into the children’s memories. Secondly, advertisements allow parents to easily find the items that their infants need. Without advertising, parents will probably have a hard time browsing in the plethora of products on the market.
In conclusion, while advertising might seem to affect children negatively in some aspects, I think that adverts aimed at kids should be permitted to continue because of several positive reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56338028169 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03203160139 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7157190395 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266406025879 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842659286011 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706431381939 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173119370491 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627660918803 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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