It is believed by many people that all criminals should be sent to jail, while others hold the view that there are better punishments. This essay discusses both of these views and then my perspective will be given.
On the one hand, there are several reasons for some people to think that all offenders should be put into prison. Firstly, it is obvious that all offenders are dangerous and can harm others. Therefore, they should be locked up so that they do not pose a threat to their community. Secondly, putting all lawbreakers into prison can act as an effective deterrent against commiting crime. This makes crime rates in society decrease significantly.
On the other hand, there are also reasons for some individuals to believe that there are better alternatives. One of them is that some criminals do not deserve to serve prison sentences because their offenses may not cause serious consequences. For example, authorities should be lenient on minor crimes such as petty thefts and should not sent people commiting such crimes to prison. In contrast, more serious crimes should receive more rigorous punishments than imprisonment. For instance, individuals that are guilty of murder should be given the death penalty instead of being sentenced to several years in jail.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments for both of the views mentioned above. Nevertheless, it is my opinion that other alternative punishments are better. This is because some offenders do not cause serious crimes to be put into jail while more serious criminals should receive stricter punishments than imprisionment.
- Some people think that all the lawbreakers should be taken into the prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives, (for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community). Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while other people argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'send'
Suggestion: send
...mes such as petty thefts and should not sent people commiting such crimes to prison....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22007722008 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78975631001 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532818532819 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2480578652 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392290281028 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127829995458 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906310386094 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243586862663 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120794440626 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.