Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others
believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future,
such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt universities play a crucial role in educating society. However, while some believe
that this education should be geared exclusively towards subjects that may be of practical use in
the future, I would agree with those who argue that one’s choice of degree should lie with the
student.
Firstly, it is vital that universities equip our workforce with scientists, engineers and other
professionals that enable our society to progress. This is because a country without such experts is
a country without the means to plan, create or maintain essential features of modern life. For
instance, if we did not have university-educated engineers, we would not enjoy such public
transport facilities and infrastructure as subways, trams and bridges. The argument goes that if
students are allowed to choose what they want to study, then there will be a shortage of these
important workers.
However, I believe allowing students to choose what they want to study is the only way to acquire
motivated, passionate, and thus competent professionals. The reason for this is that free choice
provides people with a sense of autonomy, and research has shown that autonomy is a necessary
catalyst for drive and enthusiasm. As a result, students have the impetus to master their subject
rather than merely aim for good enough. Conversely, if universities force students into one
category of study, then the drive for mastery that would have come with pursuing their passions will
disappear.
In conclusion, although it is of critical importance that universities continue to supply society with
professionals in the fields of technology and science, I feel that it should be the student’s choice to
do so on the basis that this will give them the motivation to excel in their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35051546392 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9706109987 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.102218276 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.545454545 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24945973812 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829104016295 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727887463865 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674537158126 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729391380887 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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