Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education at university occupies a center stage in a student’s life. On the one hand, many people claim that they should study lessons which are beneficial in the future. On the other hand, others believe that they should follow their interests. In what follows, both arguments will be elucidated to declare a position.
Firstly, it is believed that universities should only offer subjects that will be valuable in the long term. Obviously, on the societal level, by leading people to select particular university subjects, governments can ensure that the required knowledge and skills will be efficiently thought to the next generations. Perhaps this programming is expected to result in a boom in science, and technology which may open up new avenues toward invention, economic growth, greater future prosperity.
In contrast, there is another view that bears great potential as an important factor where students should pursue their education through their interests to become an influential person of today and tomorrow. Besides, following ambitions in order to be a skilled person is by far the most significant concern among societies. Hence, giving primacy to choose whatever they like motivates them to be flexible citizens in the future, making them passionate about what they are learning.
Taken together, both sides of the argument regarding university studies have strong supports as filling society necessities and prosperous career. I am of the conviction that taking courses regarding each person’s interest can act as a catalyst to thrive students in many areas.
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both views and give 56
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both views and give 56
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Suggestion:
...enues toward invention, economic growth, greater future prosperity. In contra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, regarding, so, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45748987854 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81502607697 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672064777328 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2366971279 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361589719023 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114014721233 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752946571134 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187555658949 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839090075128 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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