Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
In this day and age, it is univerally acknowledged that the youngster have the right to decide what they will study in higher education, while other argue that it would be better to forced students to choose some particular disciplines which do wonder for their future. In my perspective, I full concur with the statement that pupils should feel free to opt to subjects.
To begin with, it is undeniable that there is a radical amount of benefits of joining subjects related to up-and-coming occupations such as science, technology, etc. As can be seen, there a plenty of job opportunites after graduating because the need of well-trained employees increases day by day. What's more, workers who are in the mentioned fields often have high wage. As a result, asking students to participate in some specific working fields may help them to gain higher life standard.
On the flip side, it is the right for each individual to make a decision on what they will study in universities. It is because we are the only ones who can understand ourselves best. Consequently, we know what genres of jobs suit us most. In addition, doing things which make you feel confident and pleased has a significant influence on efficiency and final results. For instance, should you the one who are into numbers, you can spents hours to do math homework regardless of being bored and tired. Resultantly, students may feel free and be more productive to study or do what they aspire to do.
In a nutshell, while each has each own perks, I strongly believe that letting student pick their subjects in higher education.
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- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both views and give 64
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90808823529 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83025919421 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5879211586 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204918618023 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616767822966 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537305731541 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112551582846 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453477469046 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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