Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Nowsaday, art is so familiar with people and students. some opinions say that art is an integral subject in school. But the others think it is wasting our time. In my sight, i think that both views have its own advantages.
there are several reasons why art plays a necessary role in school and students' life. drawing is the best way for human to express their feelings, emotions. Or whenever they have sensitive problems, they will draw it on the paper. Either for children, they still have things that are hard to talk so that's why art appeared in school. For example, parents don't know about stuffs their children have or do in school. When their child is bullied by others pupils in class, they won't know that until they saw their child's drawings in their bag and started helping their son or daughter about their problems.
In contrast, there are some strong arguments support the idea that art is a waste of time. In school, children have to learn lots of important subjects such as math, literally, science,...so that they don;t even have time to learn unneccessary one like drawing things. For instance, instead of paying time on doing silly art homework, parents prefer their child spend more time on searching idea for their math or science project.
All in all, both viewpoints have its own profits that support student in school-life.
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| 2020-01-09 | tiendung00001 | 56 | view |
| 2019-11-29 | Prabh gill | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-26 | itsshuvro | 84 | view |
| 2019-08-20 | Mr.Strange | 67 | view |
| 2019-07-26 | vudinhthuyornot | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8025751073 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36160723854 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609442060086 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8703915831 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9285714286 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296890608979 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120567808907 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997847479525 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193189085684 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143820717613 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.