Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The topic of road safety has been grabbing a great deal of publicity. It is widely believed that the best way to diminish traffic threats is to elevate the age at which a person can legally drive a motorcycle or car. While I agree that age has a significant impact on traffic participation, I perceive that other factors are also critical.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people believe that increasing the minimum driving age would decrease deaths and injuries. Adolescents tend to violate the law and cause accidents due to their lack of maturity, responsibility, and experience. It is evident that older drivers react with greater speed than younger ones to risky and unexpected circumstances while driving. For instance, if a child or a pet suddenly cross the road, younger drivers might be frightened and panic, whereas the experienced ones would consistently use their brake.
On the other hand, I am convinced that there are numerous alternative ways to reduce traffic offenses. Firstly, the government should spend more money enhancing transportation infrastructure in order to improve driving conditions. Nevertheless, authorities should encourage people to take public transportation rather than private vehicles to reduce the volume of traffic. Finally, for those who violate traffic laws, harsh punishments must be enforced, hence drivers are likely to obey the law.
In conclusion, while there are justifications that raising the driving age certainly affects the number of traffic accidents, I would contend that there are plenty of ways to achieve better outcomes.
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| 2023-09-01 | emzin | 61 | view |
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| 2023-01-29 | Charles Le | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37698412698 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05567666221 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0110867272 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.916666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217084621656 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674123291114 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626492655539 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111825928529 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045515833822 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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