Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people belive that the best way to improve stress safety is use more traffics light for driving a car or motorbike. In my oppinion, their view have both benefit and drawback with each person or each occupation. The following esaay will analyse these statement more clearly.
On the one hand, if the road increase the minimum legal age, people's life will be more easiness, comfort and safer. The citizen will be more confident and do not worry when they go on the stress. Taking belived from parents to alow their teenager join in trafic for improving themselves in both mentality and physical health and also tranning children will be more indepentdent, confident and braver. Furthermore, this change can improve awareness of each person when use means of transport. Making a social with people which in here they obey the rule of transport and help their life better. For instance, when adult obey the rule then they can teach their teenagers for trainning them become a helpful person in the social and know the significant of obey the traffic's rules. In addition, traffics light is also a assistant of traffic police which is help police to the road safer.
On the other hand, when there are a lot of traffic light people will be more confident to go on road by their vehicle following that, they will depend too much on transport then it make an bad infullunce to the environment. Moreover, a lot of traffic light will make some people anrry, stress and tired. they will find any way to pass the red light without waiting, it may occur a terrible accident. For example, when people have pressure at their companies or their businesses, they do not have enough alertness for waiting the red light and then make an horrible accident. In addition, It also spend a lot time for waiting the traffic turn green and it is the main reason for the traffic jam at many country in the world.
To conclude, increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike can be help the road safer but the most important is the awareness of each person when they using means of transport for improving the life better and more bright in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67989417989 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38620965731 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468253968254 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7877884823 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211504272102 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790645128262 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919898657758 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164935480935 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634783534613 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.